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khashka Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 03:45 PM
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More bad poetry.....
We fashion the knives
That stab us in the back
Lovingly forged
Sharpened with
Obsessive devotion
And when we feel
The first cut
We're still surprised




Khash.
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 03:47 PM
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1. Yep
We bring it on ourselves. :)

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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 04:01 PM
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2. My dear Khash!
Ouch! Very good, sweetie.......

But I'm not sure it's happened to me.......yet...

I had a good chat after you.....

And....have you recovered yet?

:hug:
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billyskank Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 04:05 PM
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3. Hi khash!
:hug:
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 04:57 PM
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4. That
is not bad poetry.

:hug:
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Road Scholar Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 05:00 PM
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5. Khash, not bad at all. Please don't be so neg
when referring to yourself please. After a while, you'll start to believe it. :headbang: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
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crim son Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 05:05 PM
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6. It has truth in it. I like it. n/t
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Xipe Totec Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 05:09 PM
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7. Not bad
Pretty good, actually.

You want bad? Here:

Compass of my life,
love that was never meant to be.

Dark beacon defined by absence,
lightning rod of powerless rage.

Guide of my life,
and focus of frustrated fury.

Absence that defines me,
background that marks,
a place I never was.

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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 06:50 PM
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8. I like the poem khashka!
And, in reading it, I could tell it was from the heart.

Keep writing! :hi:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 06:53 PM
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9. I should PM you the poem I wrote about knives...
now thats some bad poetry :P


yours however...is NOT bad, not bad at all :hi:
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 08:35 PM
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10. check your PM...
see what I mean ;)

:hug:
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BarenakedLady Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Oct-09-06 08:37 PM
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11. Not bad at all
You are exactly spot on.
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