HELP!!! I need advice from anyone and EVERYONE reading this!!!

[battleknight24]

Let me get one thing straight... I have done and said some really bad things, so I probably won't be getting any sympathy from any of you... and I don't deserve any...

I'll make this story as short as possible... telling it in detail would fill up a book...

I am a 22 year old guy and I have friends with this girl for 4 years... she's 18... we met when I was a senior in high school and she was an 8th Grader... Over the past 4 years we've had lots of good times, and a few bad times like any other friendships. But overwhelmingly this girl means the world to me... she's like part of my family! We've talked about being more than friends and we've... ahem... experienced other things together... but we've also kept ours a friendship.

This past May, although she is a straight A student, she came very close to NOT graduating... its a VERY complicated story, but she ended up having to write a 10 or 12 page paper... I helped her with it a little, proofreading it, making suggestions, pointers... and she turned it in the day before graduation and found out she was graduating the morning of the ceremony.

I'll continue this story in another post... this one is getting long...

[TheWizardOfMudd]

1. Thanks for the warning!

[DS1]

2. I suspect beer

this post isn't long at all, there's no reason to start another one

[TOhioLiberal]

3. Well thanks for clearing that one up...

:shrug:

[JVS]

4. My advice is to work on your story-telling.

This tale goes nowhere and I don't see what your problem is. Perhaps it would help to take a writing course.

[battleknight24]

6. I'm actually a decent writer... I'm just a little scared and nervous...

... right now...

[JVS]

7. I'm just razzing you. Although dividing up the story really doesn't...

make it easier. Don't be scared or nervous. Things will be fine. :toast:

[stevedeshazer]

5. Bad things...eighth grader...

I thought she was 18, too. She was like part of the family...

Is there a love child on the way?

[Ouabache]

8. You weren't initimate until she was 16 and you only made grammar

suggestions for the paper.

That should be your story and you should stick to it.
Really.