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corporatewhore Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-08-04 12:34 PM
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Why wont any one read my thoughtful post on antiarab racism and abu ghraib
why does every one respond to my flame-alicious posts but not my more thoughtful ones? any waay heres the link and respond to it Damn it!!
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_mesg&forum=104&topic_id=1555436&mesg_id=1555436
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Journeyman Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-08-04 12:52 PM
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1. First impression. . .
a little trick from my journalism days -- cut your work into short paragraphs: it makes it easier to follow, people think their reading faster, and it forces you to write more concisely. Three sentences per paragraph is about right. That said, I'll go read the article.
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