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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Nov-07-07 12:20 PM
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7. I wonder if
Edited on Wed Nov-07-07 12:21 PM by Tuesday Afternoon
being right
keeps you warm
alone at night

I wonder if
you told her
everything

Does she know
it all
Does she know anything

I wonder how she finds it in her heart
To keep it together
when it was falling apart

I wonder why you kept going back to her
I wonder why she allowed you to return

I wonder if this is truly the mark of a good and successful marriage.
In the end the staying together, the outlasting.

The Quantity over the Quality.
The years. The time.
what kind of woman she must be

I wonder why you think you have all this time.
Time means nothing to you.
As if there is no God.
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