Reply #5: hi francine - thanks for caring enough to send a ltte

[faithnotgreed]

i like what you say here. since you ask for feedback my thoughts are these:

in the second sentence, instead of the small children, i may replace that sentence with something like,
"what is this ad trying to convey? it only seems to be another thinly veiled attempt at fear, not unlike the consistent terror alerts (recently, one was based on 4 yo information, which the administration admitted)


and in the 3rd paragraph (most despicable...) i would only add
"most despicable is his use of God and the word "freedom" as an excuse......
It has been proven by many reputable sources that Iraq was in no way connected to 9/11.

and a minor grammatical in first sentence. "in its final act of..."
instead of it's
(no apostrophe)

you did great francine, and again i appreciate your concise letter of conviction! hope what i wrote made sense