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Fri Jul-17-09 01:38 AM Response to Reply #6 |
| 8. One sentence would make it better |
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| -Quick I need grammar help with 2 sentences, it's very important | Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 01:24 AM | #0 |
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Also, do you think that this is good enough? |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 01:27 AM | #1 |
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Definitely good enough! |
CaliforniaPeggy | Jul-17-09 01:34 AM | #3 |
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I think those are wonderful! |
CaliforniaPeggy | Jul-17-09 01:32 AM | #2 |
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I know that with all those commas the grammar must be wrong |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 01:35 AM | #5 |
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The commas are fine. |
CaliforniaPeggy | Jul-17-09 01:36 AM | #7 |
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Lovely. |
Betsy Ross | Jul-17-09 01:34 AM | #4 |
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really? could I make it all one sentence? |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 01:36 AM | #6 |
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One sentence would make it better |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 01:38 AM | #8 |
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how bout now? |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 02:03 AM | #9 |
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Well, if you're one of those Serial Comma freaks... |
Oeditpus Rex | Jul-17-09 02:30 AM | #12 |
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L7: First sentence is fine except the colon (:) is incorrect I'd just use a dash (-). |
old mark | Jul-17-09 02:17 AM | #10 |
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I edit my sons papers all the time and always fear |
handmade34 | Jul-17-09 02:17 AM | #11 |
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good as is. nt |
Deep13 | Jul-17-09 11:37 AM | #13 |
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nice, as is....my version - |
Tuesday Afternoon | Jul-17-09 11:44 AM | #14 |
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that's it |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 11:47 AM | #15 |
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oh my! You are most welcome... |
Tuesday Afternoon | Jul-17-09 11:51 AM | #16 |
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Thanks this evening will be full of good food |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 11:57 AM | #17 |
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How can you have lived in 8 states AND 5 countries and only had 6 homes? |
gmoney | Jul-17-09 01:03 PM | #18 |
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visited, we've only lived in 2 towns |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 04:09 PM | #20 |
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First off, what is a 10th 'weeding' anniversary? |
Ikonoklast | Jul-17-09 01:07 PM | #19 |
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punk it was a typo and by the time I noticed it was too late to change |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 04:10 PM | #21 |
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Oh, so no sharing, huh? |
Ikonoklast | Jul-17-09 04:34 PM | #22 |
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That's right I'm gonna celebrate all by myself! |
Lorax7844 | Jul-17-09 04:35 PM | #23 |
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Enjoy your day! |
Ikonoklast | Jul-17-09 04:49 PM | #24 |
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The family that gardens together stays together |
pokerfan | Jul-17-09 04:56 PM | #25 |
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