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82. Here's how it goes down:
A pretty blonde with a bouffant shoots an unseen someone twice. After shooting the person, she breaks down, screaming and crying. She falls in a heap on the floor, cradling the gun. The whole scene is shot in a bright white light, and the only sound is that sort of underwater sound you get in a swimming pool.

Elvis is going down an escalator in an airport. A big, stylized sign, reminiscent of 50's travel posters, welcomes him to Honolulu. All the luggage comes out of a tunnel. Elvis retrieves his small suitcase, and the scene ends with an extended shot of the luggage coming out, going around the carousel, and going back into a tunnel. One particular suitcase seems to be the focus of the shot, and the scene fades out with the blue suitcase retreating into the tunnel. The mechanical sound of the luggage carousel and the sounds of women's heels clacking dominate the soundtrack.

A seedy motel, daylight. Elvis is checking into the motel. The Indian clerk asks how long he's staying, and Elvis says he's staying for a week. As Elvis walks away, the clerk gives him an odd look. Elvis uses the key card to get into his room. The first thing we see in the room a lamp shaped like a hula girl. Once in the room, he takes all of the clothes out of his suitcase and puts them away, hanging his shirts carefully. All of his shirts are very, very similar Hawaiian shirts. They all look brand new. He takes a shower, and while he's in the shower, the camera focuses on him washing his face very carefully, followed by the shot of the water running down onto the floor of the bathtub, past a horrific rusty stain. The sounds of the shower fade in and out with the sounds of a radio in an adjacent room. The music is a sad, slow Mexican ballad.

Much later in the evening, it's dark and Elvis goes down to the beach. He's wearing a clean, pressed Hawaiian shirt, and khaki slacks. There's a party at the beach, and it's very crowded. The only light is flickering bonfires and tiki torches. The camera lurches drunkenly towards the bonfires and torches. Loud, chaotic music with a fast beat and lots of trumpets is playing. All the other men are dirty and unshaven, and all the women are beautiful, but hard and greedy looking. Almost everyone is either smoking a cigarette or pot. The crowd parts and a beautiful woman with long, stringy blonde hair is standing there. She looks strung out. She's wearing a tiny bikini, and she has almost no breasts. She runs her hand slowly down her smooth, deeply tanned torso, stopping when she gets to her crotch. The implication is clear. A man steps out of the crowd and moves towards Elvis. He gestures at the woman, and says to Elvis "You like what you see?" Elvis doesn't respond.

Elvis goes back to his motel room. It's dark. He turns on the light, and there's a naked woman in his bed. She's beautiful, with white skin, raven black hair, and large breasts. He asks "Who are you?" and she responds "I had nowhere else to go!" He accepts this, and slowly gets ready for bed, putting on blue flannel pajamas, and brushing his teeth in the bathroom. A tiny window above the shower is open, much too small for her to have come in through. The dirty rose-colored curtains blow slightly in the wind. Once in bed, she reaches for him, but he turns away. She looks totally crushed. She sneaks into the bathroom and sobs silently. The fluorescent light on the ceiling flickers several times and goes out.

The next day, Elvis is standing in a bank. He's talking to the teller, a middle-aged, slim, black woman. He asks about a safety deposit box, and gives the teller a key. The teller walks into the back, and Elvis looks around the bank in a bored manner. The teller asks him to follow her, and he does. Women's heels are the only sound, other than the dialogues between Elvis and the teller.

Perfect, curling waves are breaking out in a perfect blue ocean. The camera is looking out towards the water, so no land is visible. The camera slowly sinks, and the sound goes from crashing waves to that same swimming-pool sound.

That evening, he goes back to the party on the beach. It's almost identical to the previous night. Elvis moves forward through the crowd, but this time, the crowd parts to show the blonde with the bouffant from the opening shot. She's wearing a tight, short-sleeved pink sweater, and long, full skirt with a crinoline. They see each other, they're lit with a white light, and the music changes to "I Can't Help Falling in Love With You." They move towards each other, and give each other broad smiles. For a second, the spotlight brightens to the intensity of the opening shot, and we see her sobbing and holding the gun. Then the spotlight fades back to normal. Her eyes widen and her smile gets bigger. She says her name is Betty. They smile. They're in love. He asks if he can see her again, and she says yes. As Elvis leaves the beach party, in a shadowy corner he sees the strung-out blonde from the night before performing oral sex on a man with long, stringy blonde hair. The man grins at Elvis, and he's missing several teeth.

Again, Elvis goes back to his room to find the dark-haired woman. She's still naked. He asks her what her name is and she says "Veronica, my name is Veronica." She gives her head an affected toss. She looks like she's not telling the truth. Again, she's shown in the bathroom crying.

The waves are shown again. An Iiwi flits through the trees. The camera zooms in on the bird's eye. This shot is oddly grainy compared with the rest of the film.

Elvis and Betty are in a diner. They're both drinking milkshakes with long straws. They look very happy. Betty asks Elvis why he came to Honolulu, and Elvis replies that someone died. She looks sad for a minute, then brightens and says "Well, I'm glad you came!" He says "I'm glad too!" They hold hands. Betty asks if he would like to come over for dinner. Elvis says he would like that very much. Again, "I Can't Help Falling in Love With You" is heard.

The same evening, Elvis knocks on the door of a house. He's looking exceptionally clean-cut in a starched white shirt and tie. Betty's parents open the door. Betty's dad is tall and tan. He's wearing an argyle sweater. Betty's mom is dressed in a short-sleeved white blouse with a ruffled collar, a long skirt with a crinoline, and an apron. She's wearing pearls. She has a strangely hurt expression. They all sit down at the table. Betty serves them all. They're all drinking milk. Betty's dad asks Elvis what his father does for a living. Elvis responds that his dad manages a plant. Betty's dad smiles and nods approvingly.

After dinner, Elvis and Betty go into the den. The den's got wood paneling and a rock fireplace, and looks just like Mrs. Robinson's den in "The Graduate." There's an odd, strangely blocky red lamp in the corner. Elvis stares at the lamp, reminded of something. When he turns around, Betty is standing there naked. He moves towards her, embracing her passionately. Betty's father is shown leering at them through some wooden blinds from another room in the house. He clearly loves watching them together.

After leaving Betty's house, Elvis goes back to the beach. He thinks he sees the strung-out blonde, but he realizes it's another girl.

Elvis goes back to the motel, and Veronica is there. He doesn't say anything to her. She cries in the bathroom some more.

Waves. The Iiwi.

Betty and Elvis are on a picnic together. They're on a bluff overlooking the ocean. They've got a blanket spread out, and they're drinking cokes out of a bottle. Betty is a sweet, innocent girl again. No mention is made of the previous evening.

Elvis goes back to the party on the beach. He sees Betty talking to a group of rough-looking men. When Betty sees him, she moves towards him, blocking his view of the men. She's half-hidden in the darkness. He asks "What are you doing here?" She steps into the light, and he sees she's been crying. She's desperate, and wild eyed. He says "Come home with me. Come back to my hotel." Then he grabs her and holds her pressed against him.

They go back to his hotel, and it's a totally different room. This room is paneled in rich wood, and there are red drapes covering the window. This room is much nicer, and Veronica is nowhere to be seen. The red lamp from Betty's parents' den is on the bedside table. They get in bed and start to make love in slow motion. She's crying, and he kisses away her tears. The under water sound is heard, and the light turns into a bright spotlight.

The next morning, Betty takes a shower, and the water is shown dripping down onto the shower floor. It's a nice tile now. Slow music is playing, with lots of violins. Meanwhile, Elvis is packing. He opens the closet door, and there is nary a Hawaiian shirt to be seen. Betty comes out of the bathroom wearing a short jean skirt over a tight black bodysuit. Her hair is straight and shoulder-length with bangs and streaks. They smile at each other.

They're back at the airport, and they're getting on a plane together! They take their seats, and smile some more. They're very much in love. She pats her stomach, implying she's pregnant. Elvis looks at her proudly.

The closing shot is almost the same as the opening shot. Betty, with the bouffant, is screaming and crying. She falls in a heap on the floor, cradling the gun. White light, swimming pool sound.

Credits.




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  What if Leni Riefenstahl had directed The Sound of Music? Rabrrrrrr  Jul-02-08 06:04 PM   #0 
   Probably have a lot more lights  old mark   Jul-02-08 06:05 PM   #1 
   Brian DePalma's Bambi  MrScorpio   Jul-02-08 06:10 PM   #2 
   I was thinking a Werner Herzog version of Bambi.  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:34 PM   #105 
   I think David Lynch could have done interesting things with Singin' in the Rain.  MrCoffee   Jul-02-08 06:12 PM   #3 
   The midget (has to be a midget!) would dance behind Fred Astaire, fisting himself in a penguin suit  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 06:16 PM   #6 
      Sorry XemaSab, but THIS is officially the greatest thing I have ever read.  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:54 PM   #111 
         Damn.  XemaSab   Jul-04-08 03:25 PM   #112 
            Yours was still great, but penguin costumed fisting midgets? Unfuckwithable.  primate1   Jul-04-08 03:36 PM   #113 
               Okay, what if the picnic scene begins and ends with an extreme close-up  XemaSab   Jul-05-08 01:51 PM   #120 
                  Give it up, Xema - you can't top a self-fisting enpenguined midget, and you know it.  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-05-08 01:53 PM   #121 
   Oliver Stone directing Turner and Hooch  MrCoffee   Jul-02-08 06:13 PM   #4 
   John Waters' "The Godfather"  Kutjara   Jul-02-08 06:16 PM   #5 
   Uwe Boll's "Citizen Kane"  IAmJacksSmirkingRevenge   Jul-02-08 06:28 PM   #7 
   Yep, you win. Can't top that one.  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 06:54 PM   #13 
   Peter Bogdanovich's 'The Wizard of Oz'  Oeditpus Rex   Jul-02-08 06:35 PM   #8 
   Roman Polanski's "Home Alone"  datasuspect   Jul-02-08 06:48 PM   #9 
   Roman Polanski's "My Girl."  XemaSab   Jul-02-08 07:37 PM   #16 
   Roman Polanski's "American Beauty"  datasuspect   Jul-02-08 07:42 PM   #18 
   Oh man, that would be awesome!  cemaphonic   Jul-02-08 08:45 PM   #22 
      Haha, Repulsion was my immediate thought too.  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:42 PM   #109 
   Roland Emmerich's "Oklahoma!"  terrya   Jul-02-08 06:51 PM   #10 
   Rod Serling's "Mary Poppins"  faygokid   Jul-02-08 06:52 PM   #11 
   That would probably look like this:  Aristus   Jul-02-08 07:41 PM   #17 
      Excellent! Got one of Sam Peckinpah's "Toy Story?"  faygokid   Jul-02-08 08:08 PM   #20 
   M. Night Shamawhatever's "This Is Spinal Tap"  bbernardini   Jul-02-08 06:53 PM   #12 
   The twist would be that it was a story that Michael from All In The Family was writing...  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:39 PM   #107 
   Sam Peckinpah's "Apple Dumpling Gang" and "Parent Trap" and "Beach Blanket Bingo"  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 06:57 PM   #14 
   Sidney Lumet's version of the Broadway musical "The Wiz"  terrya   Jul-02-08 07:01 PM   #15 
   David Lynch's Blue Hawaii  XemaSab   Jul-02-08 07:50 PM   #19 
   Here's how it goes down:  XemaSab   Jul-03-08 04:46 PM   #82 
      Splendid!  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 05:00 PM   #83 
      Thank you!  XemaSab   Jul-03-08 05:39 PM   #87 
      That...is quite possibly the greatest thing I have ever read.  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:37 PM   #106 
         Thank you!  XemaSab   Jul-04-08 02:49 PM   #110 
   My Dinner With Andre, by Sergio Leone  cemaphonic   Jul-02-08 08:38 PM   #21 
   And at the end, Andre shoots the waiter and bartender and he and Wally walk out  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 10:04 PM   #25 
   She didn't?  adsosletter   Jul-02-08 08:56 PM   #23 
   GMTA  WannaJumpMyScooter   Jul-02-08 10:05 PM   #26 
      "Give me the gun Rolf!"  adsosletter   Jul-03-08 01:46 AM   #45 
   Alfred Hitchcock's "Happy Feet"  ocelot   Jul-02-08 08:59 PM   #24 
   Cecil B. Demille's "Breakfast Club"  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 10:08 PM   #27 
   Jonathan Winters' Rebecca  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 10:16 PM   #28 
   Rob Zombie's "Hannah Montana: The Movie"  jmm   Jul-02-08 10:19 PM   #29 
   THAT would be amazing.  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:40 PM   #108 
   Woody Allen's Lord of the Rings  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 10:19 PM   #30 
   Bob Fosse's Henry: Portrait of a Serial Killer  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-02-08 10:25 PM   #31 
   D. W. Griffith's "Do The Right Thing"  DS1   Jul-02-08 11:36 PM   #32 
   Stanley Kubrick's "Jackass: The Movie"  DS1   Jul-02-08 11:38 PM   #33 
   Se7en, by the Pixar Team  DS1   Jul-02-08 11:40 PM   #34 
   Jean Luc-Godard's "Dude, Where's My Car?"  bicentennial_baby   Jul-02-08 11:41 PM   #35 
   Martin Scorsese's "Bambi."  Starbucks Anarchist   Jul-02-08 11:41 PM   #36 
   Paul Verhoven's Bridget Jones's Diary  DS1   Jul-02-08 11:43 PM   #37 
   David Cronenberg's Das Boot  DS1   Jul-02-08 11:44 PM   #38 
   Kurosawa's Clueless  bicentennial_baby   Jul-02-08 11:45 PM   #39 
   Triumph of the Lonely Yodeling Marionette Goatherd  Oregonian   Jul-03-08 12:26 AM   #40 
   Luis Buñuel's remake of "From Justin to Kelly"  bob_weaver   Jul-03-08 01:17 AM   #41 
   Pier Paolo Pasolini's version of "Finding Nemo"  bob_weaver   Jul-03-08 01:23 AM   #42 
   The Edward D. Wood, Jr. production of "An Inconvenient Truth"  bob_weaver   Jul-03-08 01:24 AM   #43 
   In which cashmere sweaters reduce the need to heat with oil  nuxvomica   Jul-03-08 08:33 AM   #60 
      Here are some highlights:  bob_weaver   Jul-03-08 10:13 AM   #65 
   You mean she didn't?  REP   Jul-03-08 01:25 AM   #44 
   Charles Chaplin: Casablanca  struggle4progress   Jul-03-08 01:48 AM   #46 
   John Ford's Steel Magnolias  sfexpat2000   Jul-03-08 02:15 AM   #47 
   John Carpenter's Harvey  raouldukelives   Jul-03-08 02:33 AM   #48 
   Todd Browning's Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants...  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:44 AM   #49 
   Federico Fellini's Bridges of Madison County...  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:45 AM   #50 
      James Whale's Tin Cup...  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:46 AM   #51 
         Fritz Lang's Ronin...  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:48 AM   #52 
            Roman Polanski's Viva Las Vegas...  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:48 AM   #53 
               Alejandro Jodorowsky's Plan 9 From Outer Space......  bridgit   Jul-03-08 05:51 AM   #54 
                  David Lean's Juno  bridgit   Jul-03-08 02:45 PM   #79 
   Rob Zombie's "Send Me No Flowers"  terrya   Jul-03-08 06:36 AM   #55 
   Ken Russell doing just about anything  Godlesscommieprevert   Jul-03-08 07:27 AM   #56 
   Russ Meyers, "The Sound of Music"  old mark   Jul-03-08 08:07 AM   #57 
   yeah  JVS   Jul-03-08 09:28 AM   #63 
   He passed away on September 18, 2004  bob_weaver   Jul-03-08 10:15 AM   #67 
   LOL! That would have been awesome.  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 10:16 AM   #68 
      Very sorry to hear Russ is gone  old mark   Jul-05-08 05:16 PM   #122 
   Fellini: Dumb and Dumber  sarge43   Jul-03-08 08:17 AM   #58 
   Quentin Tarantino's Shrek  baldguy   Jul-03-08 08:25 AM   #59 
   Sam Peckinpah and "Smokey and the Bandit"  x-g.o.p.er   Jul-03-08 08:58 AM   #61 
   as rewritten by Samuel Beckett  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 10:30 AM   #72 
   Mel Brooks directs "The Omen"  Lurking_Argyle   Jul-03-08 09:25 AM   #62 
   Wim Wenders directs "Three Men and a Baby"  ulysses   Jul-03-08 10:09 AM   #64 
   Ingmar Bergman's "It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad World"  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 10:15 AM   #66 
   Or Sam Peckinpah had directed "A Streetcar Named Desire"...  mitchum   Jul-03-08 10:19 AM   #69 
   "Stella!!" (gatling gun explodes into action...) "Stella!!" (more gatling gun)  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 10:28 AM   #70 
      Nicely done!  mitchum   Jul-03-08 10:29 AM   #71 
   Gus Van Sant's "The Bad News Bears"...  mitchum   Jul-03-08 10:33 AM   #73 
   Ron Howard's Lawrence of Arabia  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 01:00 PM   #74 
   George Cukor's "Raging Bull"  terrya   Jul-03-08 01:02 PM   #75 
   "Jake, you were fabulous out there!"  mitchum   Jul-03-08 01:24 PM   #76 
   "Birth of a Nation" -- A Spike Lee Joint  Blue_Tires   Jul-03-08 02:22 PM   #77 
   Death of a Salesman- Michael Bay  DS1   Jul-03-08 02:27 PM   #78 
   Billy Wilder's There Will Be Blood  bridgit   Jul-03-08 02:46 PM   #80 
   Not such a stretch, really!  Lautremont   Jul-03-08 06:08 PM   #88 
      Do you know Billy Wilder's work?  bridgit   Jul-04-08 02:25 AM   #92 
         I'm no expert,  Lautremont   Jul-04-08 10:02 AM   #98 
   Mel Gibson's "Schindler's List"  XemaSab   Jul-03-08 02:53 PM   #81 
   Or Steven Spielberg's Jud Süss?  Lautremont   Jul-03-08 06:10 PM   #89 
      Marlon Brando's "The Chosen"?  XemaSab   Jul-03-08 06:19 PM   #90 
   Quentin Tarantino's FORREST GUMP  derby378   Jul-03-08 05:17 PM   #84 
   Or by Robert Zemeckis - imagine how even more awful that would be!  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-03-08 05:20 PM   #85 
      Pfft!  derby378   Jul-03-08 05:29 PM   #86 
   David Cronenberg's "Sleepless in Seatlle"  FloridaJudy   Jul-03-08 06:25 PM   #91 
   Ron Howard's Satyricon  bridgit   Jul-04-08 02:32 AM   #93 
   Ingmar Bergman's "Porky's"  MilesColtrane   Jul-04-08 03:51 AM   #94 
   Kurosawa's "Fiddler on the Roof"  MilesColtrane   Jul-04-08 03:55 AM   #95 
   Spike Lee's "The Apple Dumpling Gang"  Bucky   Jul-04-08 04:15 AM   #96 
   Buster Keaton's The Guns of Navarone  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-04-08 09:46 AM   #97 
   Charlie Chaplin's Swimming to Cambodia  AchtungToddler   Jul-04-08 10:44 AM   #99 
   Penelope Spheeris' Apocalypse Now!  bridgit   Jul-04-08 12:33 PM   #100 
   David Lynch's Alvin and the Chipmunks  bridgit   Jul-04-08 12:33 PM   #101 
   Fellini's "Brady Bunch Movie"  FloridaJudy   Jul-04-08 12:58 PM   #102 
   Wachowski Brothers Wizard of Oz  FarceOfNature   Jul-04-08 01:10 PM   #103 
   Stanley Kubrick's Bad Boys II  primate1   Jul-04-08 02:33 PM   #104 
   Krzysztof Kieslowski's Ace Ventura: Pet Detective  XemaSab   Jul-04-08 03:44 PM   #114 
   John Water's "Red Dawn."  KerrytravelersDU Moderator   Jul-04-08 04:47 PM   #115 
   Alfred Hitchcock presents "Sesame Street's Follow That Bird!"  KerrytravelersDU Moderator   Jul-04-08 04:48 PM   #116 
   Lars von Trier's "Singing in the Rain"  u4ic   Jul-04-08 05:24 PM   #117 
   And Steven Spielberg's Breaking the Waves  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-04-08 07:59 PM   #118 
      And any Dogme 95 director doing a James Bond film  Rabrrrrrr   Jul-04-08 08:00 PM   #119 
   David Lean's version of Kung Pow!  EstimatedProphet   Jul-05-08 05:24 PM   #123 
   Roger Corman's "Hello Dolly!"  terrya   Jul-05-08 05:30 PM   #124 
   Charles Laughton's Koyaanisqatsi  bridgit   Jul-05-08 05:37 PM   #125 
   Terrence Malick’s Hedwig and the Angry Inch  bridgit   Jul-05-08 05:37 PM   #126 
   Michael Bay's "Driving Miss Daisy"  terrya   Jul-05-08 05:38 PM   #127 
 

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