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Perseid Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Nov-23-07 11:30 PM
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9. I walked to the corner wondering why

and thought back to a time

Love seemed to share my apartment
and Love seemed to take the place of

words that you said to me

love seemed to share my worries
and then

I would
walk to the corner wondering why

but remember
that you said
you could

I believe you?
I believe in you
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  - My dear BlueIris!  CaliforniaPeggy   Nov-23-07 08:10 PM   #1 
  - Awwww, thanks, C-Peg.  BlueIris   Nov-23-07 08:14 PM   #3 
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  - No, thank you!  BlueIris   Nov-23-07 08:16 PM   #6 
  - Sometimes  Perseid   Nov-23-07 11:05 PM   #7 
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  - I walked to the corner wondering why  Perseid   Nov-23-07 11:30 PM   #9 
  - My dear Perseid!  CaliforniaPeggy   Nov-23-07 11:36 PM   #10 
  - We want to walk always in the light  Perseid   Nov-23-07 11:44 PM   #11 
  - Wintertime seemed to have eyes  Perseid   Nov-23-07 11:57 PM   #12 
  - Shadows walked across my walls  Perseid   Nov-24-07 12:10 AM   #13 
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  - Write, or remember, a poem, or get squashed  Perseid   Nov-24-07 12:39 AM   #15 
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