Tyler Durden
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Fri Jul-13-07 08:40 AM
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| 2. Sex scenes are becoming pretty cliche. |
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My advice is to do about 50% of the buildup then cut to breakfast the next morning.
Less is more, and more artistic.
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| -I Need Help Writing a Sex Scene |
romantico |
Jul-13-07 08:36 AM |
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Are you shooting it? Directing/Producing? |
soleft |
Jul-13-07 08:38 AM |
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Yeah, I'm directing |
romantico |
Jul-13-07 08:48 AM |
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Have you cast it yet? A lot will depend on your actors |
soleft |
Jul-13-07 09:12 AM |
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I have not cast it yet |
romantico |
Jul-13-07 09:18 AM |
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LOGO has a series that features only short films |
soleft |
Jul-13-07 10:00 AM |
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Sex scenes are becoming pretty cliche. |
Tyler Durden |
Jul-13-07 08:40 AM |
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I'm with you. |
mzteris |
Jul-13-07 09:10 AM |
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I agree with this. |
Left Is Write |
Jul-13-07 09:14 AM |
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Focus on the penis |
DS1 |
Jul-13-07 08:41 AM |
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Try substituting some of your erotic memories for "they make love". |
Joan_Alpern |
Jul-13-07 08:46 AM |
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What she said. |
SarahBelle |
Jul-13-07 08:50 AM |
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If that doesn't work, he could insert his fantasies. |
Joan_Alpern |
Jul-13-07 11:04 AM |
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3 words: Full frontal nudity |
flvegan |
Jul-13-07 08:48 AM |
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and |
NewJeffCT |
Jul-13-07 09:04 AM |
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and |
flvegan |
Jul-13-07 09:07 AM |
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Retro is cool... Cut to some fireworks, blooming flowers, race cars, and end with a open pit... |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 08:50 AM |
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I thought you were suggesting that RetrouLounge |
mzteris |
Jul-13-07 09:11 AM |
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No in this case I was thinking of how to symbolically represent the act of which the OP refers... |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 09:17 AM |
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RetroLounge has readily available stock footage? |
kay1864 |
Jul-13-07 09:30 AM |
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but of course |
mzteris |
Jul-13-07 11:03 AM |
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I dunno - RL can probably still help out there. |
mzteris |
Jul-13-07 11:02 AM |
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And Bees pollinating flowers! |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 12:55 PM |
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Show them leaning in for a kiss, and then pan up to a sky full of fireworks |
LeftyMom |
Jul-13-07 08:50 AM |
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Separate bed rooms or at least twin beds... |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 08:52 AM |
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Nobody ever watches at the Drive-In Den-Of-Iniquity anyhow. |
LeftyMom |
Jul-13-07 09:11 AM |
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Well, there's always a market among the Gawdless Hell-bound Infidels... |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 09:23 AM |
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"... as his arm slithered further and further into the horse's vaginal cavity....." |
matcom |
Jul-13-07 08:52 AM |
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Dear Penthouse Forum... |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 08:54 AM |
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Go Directly to Hell. Do Not Pass Go, Do Not Collect $200. |
LeftyMom |
Jul-13-07 08:54 AM |
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"..... Mr. Ed's bodice was glistening........." |
matcom |
Jul-13-07 09:01 AM |
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"Ohhh, Willlburr! Take me! Take me!" He neighed softly. |
slj0101 |
Jul-13-07 09:08 AM |
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"Oh My God!" |
NewJeffCT |
Jul-13-07 09:11 AM |
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Tell us about the characters. |
pagerbear |
Jul-13-07 09:16 AM |
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They are in their mid twenties |
romantico |
Jul-13-07 09:24 AM |
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"She is swwet..." |
AchtungToddler |
Jul-13-07 10:18 AM |
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I got it |
GoPsUx |
Jul-13-07 09:19 AM |
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"rugged yet gentle hands" |
Prag |
Jul-13-07 09:22 AM |
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dig up a paperback copy of "Best of Penthouse Letters" |
Blue_Tires |
Jul-13-07 09:29 AM |
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Fiction? FICTION?? |
kay1864 |
Jul-13-07 09:32 AM |
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well, |
Blue_Tires |
Jul-13-07 10:35 PM |
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I think you pretty much HAVE to use the word "throbbing." |
LaraMN |
Jul-13-07 09:32 AM |
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like your tongue when in the presence of the Midas guy? |
matcom |
Jul-13-07 09:33 AM |
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*sigh* |
LaraMN |
Jul-13-07 09:36 AM |
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oh that is at LEAST an 'over the bra' |
matcom |
Jul-13-07 09:37 AM |
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Maybe I'll make hubby bring it in. |
LaraMN |
Jul-13-07 09:44 AM |
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Start by asking the mechanic if he or she is good with lube |
Orrex |
Jul-13-07 09:38 AM |
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Ooh, "Lara and the Hot Female Mechanic" |
kay1864 |
Jul-13-07 09:41 AM |
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No! |
LaraMN |
Jul-13-07 09:45 AM |
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Yes! |
kay1864 |
Jul-13-07 10:02 AM |
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Jul-13-07 09:42 AM |
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I've never directed one |
Wetzelbill |
Jul-13-07 09:44 AM |
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get lots of input from your actors too |
Wetzelbill |
Jul-13-07 09:48 AM |
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I am |
romantico |
Jul-13-07 09:56 AM |
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why so gungho to show |
mzteris |
Jul-13-07 11:11 AM |
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i agree less is more |
dembotoz |
Jul-13-07 01:04 PM |
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"Input" would be the general idea, I think. |
davsand |
Jul-13-07 01:45 PM |
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I also dabble in the writing of screenplays |
Tyrone Slothrop |
Jul-13-07 10:13 AM |
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Take a look at Monster's Ball |
AchtungToddler |
Jul-13-07 10:16 AM |
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If you want to see how a good sex scene is done, watch Y Tu Mama Tambien. |
primate1 |
Jul-13-07 01:38 PM |
#57 |
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Here's a wild suggestion |
Generic Brad |
Jul-13-07 10:37 PM |
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It's all about the set up. |
MilesColtrane |
Jul-13-07 10:57 PM |
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