You are viewing an obsolete version of the DU website which is no longer supported by the Administrators. Visit The New DU.
Democratic Underground Latest Greatest Lobby Journals Search Options Help Login
Google

Reply #7: Also, avoid fragments. (cf. my first reply above) [View All]

Printer-friendly format Printer-friendly format
Printer-friendly format Email this thread to a friend
Printer-friendly format Bookmark this thread
This topic is archived.
Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU
jpgray Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Mar-18-07 10:12 PM
Response to Reply #2
7. Also, avoid fragments. (cf. my first reply above)
:P
Printer Friendly | Permalink |  | Top
 
  -Do you have any writing tips? mvd  Mar-18-07 10:00 PM   #0 
  - Write without any idea of what you're doing  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:01 PM   #1 
  - Interesting  mvd   Mar-18-07 10:04 PM   #2 
     - Also, avoid fragments. (cf. my first reply above)  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:12 PM   #7 
  - Limit your commas.  Prisoner_Number_Six   Mar-18-07 10:07 PM   #3 
  - Good one  mvd   Mar-18-07 10:10 PM   #6 
  - I'd add to that  Orrex   Mar-18-07 10:40 PM   #16 
     - How I Would Put That  Crisco   Mar-19-07 09:22 AM   #34 
  - Swap out at least every fifth word of what you copy with a synonym  Orrex   Mar-18-07 10:09 PM   #4 
  - Write in a flurry.  WritingIsMyReligion   Mar-18-07 10:10 PM   #5 
  - Scads.  rug   Mar-18-07 10:16 PM   #8 
  - Fountain pens are cool  Cobalt-60   Mar-18-07 10:18 PM   #9 
     - Agreed. And I only use #1 pencils.  rug   Mar-18-07 10:19 PM   #10 
        - Pencilitist.  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:20 PM   #11 
           - Speaking of elites, did you know Thoreau could lounge at Walden because he owned a pencil factory?  rug   Mar-18-07 10:33 PM   #15 
              - I'd heard that. I could simplify if I owned more pencil factories.  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:48 PM   #18 
  - Less is more.  graywarrior   Mar-18-07 10:26 PM   #12 
  - Another one I use  mvd   Mar-18-07 10:28 PM   #13 
  - I copy edit for a living right now. I cut out lots of "wonderful" sentences.  graywarrior   Mar-18-07 10:29 PM   #14 
  - Except when it's not.  SteppingRazor   Mar-19-07 09:30 AM   #38 
  - "Make a mess." Peter Elbow  Strawman   Mar-18-07 10:42 PM   #17 
  - Write the way you talk  Poiuyt   Mar-18-07 10:51 PM   #19 
  - I'd have longer sentences than a Thucydides/Dostoevsky lovechild if I wrote as I talk  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:52 PM   #20 
     - Ah, Stream of consciousness!  Poiuyt   Mar-18-07 11:07 PM   #24 
  - When editing, look at each of your verbs  KurtNYC   Mar-18-07 10:57 PM   #21 
  - Except for "said." "Said" is usually best.  jpgray   Mar-18-07 10:58 PM   #22 
  - Use footnotes.  ellisonz   Mar-18-07 11:00 PM   #23 
  - Here's one from Mark Twain  sammythecat   Mar-18-07 11:11 PM   #25 
  - Yup. And cut the adverbs, too.  femmedem   Mar-19-07 07:15 AM   #32 
     - That particular advice about adverbs is one I'm still working on.  sammythecat   Mar-19-07 12:27 PM   #52 
  - "All writing is garbage." - Antonin Artaud  swag   Mar-18-07 11:12 PM   #26 
  - My dear mvd.........  CaliforniaPeggy   Mar-18-07 11:14 PM   #27 
  - If you're having trouble getting started, begin with the second paragraph.  Longhorn   Mar-18-07 11:35 PM   #28 
  - I'm a thesaurus whore.  deadparrot   Mar-18-07 11:54 PM   #29 
  - Proofread carefelly. (nt)  petronius   Mar-19-07 01:40 AM   #30 
  - put pen to paper--  wildhorses   Mar-19-07 01:42 AM   #31 
  - Dont be afraid to write badly  AllegroRondo   Mar-19-07 08:58 AM   #33 
  - Revise, Revise, Revise  Crisco   Mar-19-07 09:23 AM   #35 
  - I actually disagree with this one, though it's so often cited by writing coaches  SteppingRazor   Mar-19-07 09:32 AM   #39 
     - I Always Do  Crisco   Mar-19-07 09:36 AM   #40 
  - I agree with 2/3 of Howard Cohen's ideas...  SteppingRazor   Mar-19-07 09:28 AM   #36 
  - What happened is..  mvd   Mar-19-07 11:31 AM   #51 
  - More than likely, don't write  RedStateShame   Mar-19-07 09:29 AM   #37 
  - learn all the rules  Wetzelbill   Mar-19-07 09:37 AM   #41 
  - That second one's a really good one -- if you want to write well, read A LOT n/t  SteppingRazor   Mar-19-07 09:41 AM   #43 
  - Don't think you don't need an editor  reyd reid reed   Mar-19-07 09:41 AM   #42 
  - Vary your sentence length.  Oregonian   Mar-19-07 09:56 AM   #44 
  - Microsoft Word isn't always right with its suggestions.  raccoon   Mar-19-07 10:00 AM   #45 
  - Start by reading good writing  buddyhollysghost   Mar-19-07 10:05 AM   #46 
  - Let others read your stuff  skygazer   Mar-19-07 10:08 AM   #47 
  - show don't tell  blueraven95   Mar-19-07 10:45 AM   #48 
  - Thanks, all  mvd   Mar-19-07 11:26 AM   #49 
  - just write  datasuspect   Mar-19-07 11:27 AM   #50 
 

Home » Discuss » The DU Lounge Donate to DU

Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.1 Copyright 1997-2002 DCScripts.com
Software has been extensively modified by the DU administrators


Important Notices: By participating on this discussion board, visitors agree to abide by the rules outlined on our Rules page. Messages posted on the Democratic Underground Discussion Forums are the opinions of the individuals who post them, and do not necessarily represent the opinions of Democratic Underground, LLC.

Home  |  Discussion Forums  |  Journals |  Store  |  Donate

About DU  |  Contact Us  |  Privacy Policy

Got a message for Democratic Underground? Click here to send us a message.

© 2001 - 2011 Democratic Underground, LLC