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Occulus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-11-04 02:46 PM
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82. I think I caught something else
in this release.

Look at the two paragraphs on the second page. The first has a bullet, a line to its left. It's totally misplaced.

My best guess: the second page was a continuation of a bulleted list from it's previous page- and that previous page is not the first page in the release. Why? The first page has no bulleted list; you only use bullets if you are going to use two or more related points. The second page is the only page with a pullet point, and there only a single bullet.

This is a chop job. The two pages weren't even consecutive in their order.

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