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Response to MindMover (Original post)

Tue Feb 26, 2013, 08:47 AM

2. It bugs me that, after 4 paragraphs, I still have no idea what the article is about

Aside from the inexcusable use of the word "warpsped," I think that the article should have led with a summary of the court case so that readers have some context for the larger issue.

An important issue, to be sure, but the article is poorly written.

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