I wrote this song about my wife, would love input

[votesparks]

I'm almost done with the second verse and chorus. But would love thoughts regardless.

Take care,

David

[Zorra]

1. I like your verse.

IMO, a catchy bridge and chorus would complement the verse.

Something simple like Genesis does here; this song is much more up tempo than yours, and to my ear Genesis do a good job of complementing the keyboard hook in the verse line with something tonic, relative, and interesting on the chorus and bridge, completing the song very well.

[votesparks]

2. Thanks!

for the listen, and for your thoughts.