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Fri Jan 13, 2012, 08:01 PM

A couple studio cuts from my band

I'm in the process of mixing these down so they're still "works in progress". I hope they'll play for y'all

http://soundcloud.com/gtrman4931/nickles-and-dimes


http://soundcloud.com/gtrman4931/you-dont-know-me-at-all


Thanks for listening

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Sat Jan 14, 2012, 05:58 PM

1. Awesome! Just one thing

if you don't mind me saying. I love to write lyrics and noticed the line "I might as well have committed a crime" sounds a bit squeeze in there. May I suggest something like: "Might as well live a life of crime" or something close to it? It has one less syllable and doesn't sound rushed.

Other than that, I think you have something there.

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